Kōkiri Learn

Week 4 of 5

Test your ideas with readers, then plan and draft

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Session 1 · AUTHOR: Hear Voices

Science check and reader circle

  1. 15 minScience check: find one real fact that makes your world more believable (NIWA for sea-level rise, NASA Space Place for planets, Netsafe for AI).
  2. 25 minReader circle: share your world bible and opening. Listeners say what hooked them, what confused them and one question they have.
  3. 10 minDecide what to keep, change or explain better.

Session 2 · AUTHOR: Organise

Plan and draft

  1. 10 minStory mountain: opening, build-up, problem, climax, resolution. Where does the big 'what if' matter most?
  2. 35 minDraft the story. Keep your world bible beside you so the rules stay consistent.
  3. 5 minMark the line where the reader should understand your theme.

Getting started

Use the story-mountain frame with sentence starters for each part.

Stretch

Plant a small clue early that pays off at the end.

Checkpoint

Each student has a planned story and a draft of at least the opening and build-up.

Activities for this week

  • Science check: What real science makes your world more believable?

Useful this week