Kōkiri Learn

Week 3 of 4

Compose the work and make it stronger

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Session 1 · CREATE: Arrange

Where does the eye go first?

  1. 10 minMini-lesson: visual hierarchy and emphasis. Show a mural and ask: what do you see first, second, third? How did the artist make that happen (size, contrast, colour, placement)?
  2. 10 minDraw four thumbnail layouts (matchbox size) for your work: symbol big, symbol small, off-centre, framed.
  3. 25 minChoose the strongest thumbnail and start the final work at full size.
  4. 5 minFive-second test: show a partner your work for five seconds, hide it and ask what they remember. That is your focal point.

Session 2 · CREATE: Transform

Critique and refine

  1. 15 minCritique circle in fours: each artist shows their work, stays silent, and listens to 'I notice… I wonder… What if…' comments. The artist writes them down.
  2. 30 minMake at least two deliberate changes based on the feedback, e.g. push contrast, remove a distracting detail, enlarge the symbol.
  3. 5 minProcess page: write each change and why you made it ('I made the background darker so the kete stands out').

Getting started

Refine one part of the work at a time: focal point first, then background, then details.

Stretch

Push contrast further to sharpen the main idea, or add a hidden second symbol that rewards a longer look.

Checkpoint

The work is resolved, with at least two changes documented and linked to feedback.

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