Kōkiri Learn

Week 4 of 4

Revise, publish and reflect

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Session 1 · AUTHOR: Organise

Revise and edit

  1. 20 minPeer feedback: 'One thing that worked well…' and 'Next time you could try…'.
  2. 25 minRevise for impact, then edit spelling and punctuation.
  3. 5 minFinal read-aloud.

Session 2 · AUTHOR: Respond

Publish

  1. 30 minPublish in the anthology or newsletter, or deliver as a one-minute speech.
  2. 20 minReflect: which choices worked on your audience, and how do you know?

Getting started

Revise one paragraph fully before editing the rest.

Stretch

Write a short writer's note explaining three deliberate choices.

Checkpoint

The published piece shows deliberate technique choices for its audience.

Activities for this week