Kōkiri Learn

Week 4 of 5

Compose and revise

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Session 1 · AUTHOR: Organise

Conclusions that land

  1. 15 minCompare three conclusions: summary, call to action, question.
  2. 25 minWrite a conclusion that prompts your audience to reflect or act.
  3. 10 minRead the whole piece aloud.

Session 2 · AUTHOR: Respond

Feedback round

  1. 20 minStructured peer review against the success criteria.
  2. 25 minRevise using the feedback. Kuaka asks one question about your weakest paragraph.
  3. 5 minPlan the final edit.

Getting started

Revise with one piece of feedback at a time.

Stretch

Cut 10 per cent of the words without losing meaning.

Checkpoint

A revised draft that responds to specific feedback.