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Students sprawled on beanbags in a sunny school library corner, each absorbed in a novel, with piles of books on a low table

English · World 3 of 8 · Years 7–8

Stories That Shape Us

Get lost in a great novel, work out how the author did it, then write a story that grips a real reader.

Big question: How do writers make us care about people who don't exist, and what do their stories teach us about ourselves?

You'll make
A polished short story (600–1200 words) set in a place you know, published in a class anthology and read aloud at a story evening, plus a book talk recommending your class novel.
For
A junior class who will read your stories, whānau at the story evening, and young readers of Toitoi, the journal that publishes children's writing.
Time
5 weeks · 2 sessions a week

Your mission

Why it matters

A junior class at your school has asked for new stories to read, and your class will host a story evening for whānau at the end of the term. First you'll read a novel from Aotearoa together, and short stories from here and around the world, working out how each author hooks you. Then you'll write your own short story, set somewhere you know, and read it to a real audience.

Stories are how people have always passed on knowledge, values and memory, from pūrākau told on the marae to novels read under the covers. Reading closely helps you notice what isn't said out loud: why a character acts the way they do, what a setting makes you feel, what the story is really about. Those same skills help you understand people in real life. And when you write a story yourself, you get to decide what a reader sees, feels and remembers.

A moody black-sand beach at dusk with driftwood, cliffs, rolling mist and a lone bach with a lit window, a setting waiting for a story

Your first step

Think of a place you know really well: a beach, a backyard, a marae, a bus stop, a kitchen. Write down five things you could see, hear, smell, touch or taste there. That place could become the setting of your story.

Make it yours

Choose a context

Same big question, three different places to explore it. Pick the one that fits your class and community.

  1. Where land meets sea

    Stories of beaches, harbours and the creatures of Tangaroa. Read Charlie Tangaroa and the Creature from the Sea by T.K. Roxborogh or Whale Rider by Witi Ihimaera, and write a story set on a coast you know: a wharf at dusk, a storm at the bach, something washed up on the sand.

  2. Streets, homes and families

    Realistic stories about growing up, friendship and family in towns and cities. Read Dawn Raid by Pauline (Vaeluaga) Smith or Wonder by R.J. Palacio, and write a story set in a neighbourhood, a school or a family kitchen, where an ordinary day turns into something that matters.

  3. Other times, other worlds

    Stories set in the past, or with something strange breaking into everyday life. Read My Brother's War by David Hill, The Haunting by Margaret Mahy or Holes by Louis Sachar, and write a story set in your town a hundred years ago, or on an ordinary street where one impossible thing happens.

AUTHOR

Week by week

Two sessions a week, each with Getting started and Stretch support so the whole class works together.

  1. W1Who are stories for? Meet the novelAudience: Book tasting · Understand: Reading between the lines
  2. W2Characters and settings that feel realUnderstand: The world of the story · Techniques: Show, don't tell
  3. W3Plot, tension and themeTechniques: The story mountain · Hear Voices: Whose story is this?
  4. W4Plan and draft your own storyOrganise: Story map · Organise: Draft
  5. W5Revise, read aloud and publishOrganise: Revise and edit · Respond: Story evening
Children's hands writing stories in notebooks beside a hand-drawn story map of a mountain, river, forest and hut

Hands-on

Activities

Investigations and projects that fit the weeks above. Open one to see what you need and how you'll know it worked.

Character icebergWhat does the author want me to work out about this character without saying it?Open

You need: the class novel · iceberg template (above and below the waterline) · sticky notes

  1. Above the waterline, write what the text tells you directly (age, looks, what they do).
  2. Below the line, write what you infer: feelings, fears, hopes, secrets.
  3. Match every inference with a quote and a page number.
  4. Compare with a partner. Did you infer different things from the same evidence?

How you'll know: Each inference is backed by a quote, and you can explain the step from the words to your idea.

Go further: Make an iceberg for a minor character and show how they change the main character.

Fits week 1 →
Book tastingWhich story will I choose to read next, and why?Open

You need: six to eight novels and story collections (NZ, Pasifika, Māori, global) · tasting menu sheet · a timer

  1. At each table, read the cover, blurb and first page in three minutes.
  2. On your menu, note the first line, the setting, and one question the opening makes you ask.
  3. Rate each 'must read', 'maybe' or 'not now', with a reason.
  4. Choose your independent reading book and tell a partner what hooked you.

How you'll know: You can explain what hooked you using the opening itself, not just the cover.

Go further: Write your own tasting-menu line for a book you love, to hook a classmate.

Fits week 1 →
Five-senses setting walkWhat makes a setting feel real enough to step into?Open

You need: notebook and pencil · a place to walk: the school grounds, a nearby park or beach

  1. Walk slowly, then stop in three different spots for two minutes each.
  2. At each stop, write one thing for each sense: see, hear, smell, touch, taste (or imagine taste).
  3. Circle the most unusual detail, the one nobody else would notice.
  4. Back in class, write a 100-word setting paragraph using your three best details and no 'I saw' or 'I heard'.

How you'll know: A partner can picture your setting and guess the mood from your paragraph alone.

Safety: Stay within the boundaries the teacher sets, in pairs or groups, with an adult. Near water, keep well back from the edge.

Go further: Rewrite the same place in a different mood (peaceful, then eerie) by changing only the details.

Fits week 2 →
Show, don't tellHow do writers show feelings without naming them?Open

You need: emotion cards (nervous, jealous, proud, guilty, excited, lonely) · a partner

  1. Draw a card and act the emotion without words for 20 seconds.
  2. Your partner writes down the actions that showed it (clenched fists, looking at the floor…).
  3. Write a three-sentence scene that shows the emotion through action, speech and thought, without naming it.
  4. Swap scenes. Can your partner name the emotion?

How you'll know: Readers can name the emotion from your scene without being told.

Go further: Show two emotions at once, such as a character who is excited but guilty.

Fits week 2 →
Tension graphHow does the author keep me turning pages?Open

You need: the class novel · graph paper · coloured pencils

  1. Along the bottom, mark each chapter or key event.
  2. Up the side, rate the tension from 0 (calm) to 10 (heart racing) for each point.
  3. Join the dots. Label the peaks with what happened and the technique used (cliffhanger, short sentences, a secret).
  4. Compare your graph with your literature circle. Where do you agree and disagree?

How you'll know: Your graph shows how tension rises and falls, and you can name at least two techniques that build it.

Go further: Make a tension graph of your own story plan and move an event to raise the peak.

Fits week 3 →
Theme detectiveWhat is this story really about?Open

You need: two short stories or the novel and a short story · theme word cards (courage, belonging, loyalty, injustice, identity, forgiveness)

  1. Choose a theme word that fits the story.
  2. Turn it into a statement the author might be saying: 'Belonging means…'.
  3. Find three pieces of evidence: an event, a character's choice, a line of dialogue.
  4. Test your statement with the other text. Does it say the same thing, or something different?

How you'll know: Your theme is a full statement, not one word, and it is backed by three pieces of evidence.

Go further: Find a theme the author may not have meant, and argue for it with evidence.

Fits week 3 →
First-line labHow do I make a reader need to read my second sentence?Open

You need: your story map · first-line cards: action, dialogue, setting, question, surprise

  1. Write five openings for your story, one for each card.
  2. Read them to a group of three without explaining.
  3. Each listener picks the line that made them most curious and says what they want to know next.
  4. Keep the winner and write the next three sentences straight away.

How you'll know: Listeners ask a question about your story after hearing only the first line.

Go further: Write a last line that echoes your first line in a new way.

Fits week 4 →
The grassy crater of Maungawhau Mount Eden with Auckland city and the harbour beyond
Maungawhau, Tāmaki Makaurau. In Maurice Gee's Under the Mountain, something ancient sleeps beneath Auckland's volcanoes.Photo: brewbooks from near Seattle, USA, Wikimedia Commons, CC BY-SA 2.0
The Margaret Mahy Playground in Christchurch with red leaf-shaped shade sails, a giant slide and colourful play surfaces
The Margaret Mahy Playground, Ōtautahi Christchurch, named for one of the world's great children's writers.Photo: Bernard Spragg. NZ from Christchurch, New Zealand, Wikimedia Commons, Public domain

Background reading

Read to understand

Short readings written for Kōkiri Learn students, with their sources.

Trusted NZ sites

Explore more

Placed at the stage of the journey where each one helps.

Beyond the classroom

Share it and work together

Real audiences

  • A junior class who read or listen to your stories
  • Whānau at an end-of-term story evening
  • Young readers of Toitoi, a journal of writing and art by children aged 5–13

Work with other schools

  • Read the same novel as a class in another town and run a shared online book club with mixed literature circles.
  • Swap anthologies with a partner school and write a short 'reader's letter' to each author about what gripped you.
  • Write a story relay: each school writes one part of a story set in the other school's town, using details they share.

Stretch challenges

  • Submit your story to Toitoi or a school or regional writing competition.
  • Record your story as an audio drama with sound effects for the junior class.
  • Read a second novel by the same author and compare how they build characters.
  • Turn a scene from your story into a four-panel comic, using framing and close-ups to show emotion.

New Zealand Curriculum

What this world covers

Mapped to the refreshed Phase 3 statements. The whole class covers both the Year 7 and Year 8 sequences over two years.

  • English · Reading

    A novel each year, including NZ texts by Māori, Pākehā and Pasifika authors and seminal and global texts; describing how authors use characterisation, setting and plot to shape meaning; making inferences about settings, characters and themes and justifying them with explicit and implicit evidence

    Year 7 sequence

  • English · Writing

    Writing to entertain: present real or imagined events, introduce a situation and setting, structure with paragraphs or scenes, use carefully chosen words and sensory language, and provide a resolution; plan, draft, revise and edit

    Year 7 sequence

  • English · Oral language

    Storytelling: figurative language to build atmosphere, clear narrative structure, and pace, volume and tone to convey mood; roles in group discussion (literature circles)

    Year 7 sequence

  • Social Sciences · History (Aotearoa)

    How historical fiction (Dawn Raid, My Brother's War) represents real events in Aotearoa, compared with historical sources

    Year 7 sequence

For teachers: how to run it

Text choice: the curriculum asks for at least one novel a year, texts by Māori, Pākehā and Pasifika authors, seminal texts, global texts, and texts from popular and youth cultures. Choose one class novel and make three or four others available for literature circles. Suggested NZ novels (all verified): Charlie Tangaroa and the Creature from the Sea by T.K. Roxborogh (Ngāti Porou; Huia 2020; 2021 Margaret Mahy Book of the Year), Dawn Raid by Pauline (Vaeluaga) Smith (Samoan, Scottish and Irish descent; Scholastic My New Zealand Story, 2018; teacher notes on the Scholastic NZ site), My Brother's War by David Hill (Puffin 2012; 2013 junior fiction award), Whale Rider by Witi Ihimaera (1987; seminal), The Haunting by Margaret Mahy (1982; Carnegie Medal) and Under the Mountain by Maurice Gee (1979). For confident younger readers or a quick independent read: Whetū Toa and the Magician by Steph Matuku (Ngāti Mutunga, Ngāti Tama, Te Atiawa; Huia 2018). Global: Holes by Louis Sachar, Wonder by R.J. Palacio and The Arrival by Shaun Tan (a wordless graphic novel, ideal for inference). Short stories and short texts: School Journal Level 4 stories from your school's collection, Snake and Lizard by Joy Cowley for mentor short-story craft, The Kuia and the Spider by Patricia Grace and Robyn Kahukiwa, and Mophead by Selina Tusitala Marsh (a graphic memoir, useful as a contrast). Read the class novel before starting, flag anything sensitive for your community (Dawn Raid deals with racism and police raids; My Brother's War with war and conscientious objection; both are handled for this age group, but pre-teach context using NZHistory). Pūrākau and cultural elements: when a novel draws on atua or pūrākau (Charlie Tangaroa, Whale Rider), talk with your school's kaumātua or te reo lead, and have students write their own original stories rather than retell sacred narratives. Differentiation: audio versions or shared reading for the novel, a character-iceberg template, a story-mountain planner, sentence starters for inference ('I think… because the text says…'), and a shorter story target (400 words) or a comic-strip story for students who find extended writing hard; extend with a second viewpoint, a flashback or a deliberate twist. Kuaka, the AI companion, only asks questions about students' choices as readers and writers; it never writes stories or marks them. Publishing: Toitoi publishes writing and art by children aged 5–13; check its current submission guidelines and get whānau consent before submitting.

Plan this world into any term with the two-year planner. Students can record their thinking in their Kōkiri Learn portfolio.

Ready to run it with your class?

Free trial for NZ schools. One combined Years 7–8 class, any term.